Waihanga Tuhituhi

Waihanga Tuhituhi KIDS,MEN AND WOMEN,were me some take care and some don't .I have a really mean owner read to find out about me is gonna be amazing. A a girl is going to pull me out of the case and spit on me I'm scared don't hurt me please I've got a silky, smooth lens that glisten like green stone in the sun. Ah a pear of glasses I am fresh out the case Brand spanking new. My owner is a ruff girl she eats here scabs and pics here nose and rubs the booger on me she is gross She smells like a dead rat, feels like bumpy scales, And tastes like a mouldy orange She even has skin tags. She has a brother called BEN he is clean and looks after his glasses he is like a posh boy. Man will I get spat on and all yucky stuff I was new but Now I look old. Oh what a short life I'm gonna have Oh she came in an icy chill ran up my spine as my owner came in Oh no time to get in the case and hide.I'm scared. She slowly walks in and she bite the arms of my glasses it's been ripped off ah I am hurt help she walks out Please help me I'm going to end now but remember always look after your glasses and always be really careful or you'll end up like me not good not good at all.
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The Piano WALT to right a descriptive piece of righting from the old mans point of view as he recalls his Memories

WALT to right a descriptive piece of righting from the old mans point of view as he recalls his Memories

The Memories

I am one old,brown,cringe man I know that I am going to die soon so I am going to bring back memories that happened in the past I have three awesome,sad,and ok stories the first one was very very sad second one was ok

And the third was cool I am In the store buying a peano

It cost 700 dollars but I have 650 the man said “OK I will do a bargain if you buy this jacket for 5 dollars I will give it to you for free are you OK with that yes but you have to keep it a secret otherwise I will get banned from this shop and I will get fired” OK I got the piano and the boss walked in oh now he looks like he can give me a smash he said ah you buying that sir ah yes why? oh wait yeah you see that man at the counter he gave this piano to me for free what what? Yeah he gave it to me for free come here Bobby no no sorry sir he gave him a smash it was not nice I am old but strong I through the man out the door and he was on the road ahhhhhhhh :squaws: aww no bro Dead boss I guess he is now squash boss.I run to my house and start to play   

Here I go “♬♫♬♫♬♫” I think about my wife that lovely day we walked along the sydney harbour bridge she fell of that is how she died a tear drop slowly runs down my cold,brown face I am sad.“♬♫♬♫♬♫” I keep playing. I was in the military and we flew over to the north pole to fight eskimos and It was fun we blew up there iglue there was one who survived but he was lonely and sad but we decided to blow him up to. I see back to when my dad bought me a scoter it was fun to play with it was as red as rhubarb I hand it down to my grandson he said wow cool thanks grandad he is all grown up now and I cry I slowly fade away I collapse and fall asleep don't worry I am not dead I wake up I run to the peano It was only just a dream nooooooooo I was sad my grandson was right next to me what I have no grandson I am sad for the rest of my life but wait on Dec 4 1840 I heard a knock on my door I wake up and go to the door hello hi it was that snowy day and a baby cried “whaaaa” Yay I have a grandson And I run to my garage and play the piano for my boy“♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫♬♫” He cheers yayayayayaya and I put him to sleep I tort him the hard way like what we did in 1810 Go to bet you bad little thing  Hurry up and I closed the door and he fell asleep.    

WAL about Somalia.

Somalia           

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Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

Not far off the Somali coast one of the big Vestel cargo vessels is taken over by pirates! Within a split of a second the ship has a new captain, the soup is gone as well as the cargo itself. Will our Vestrons be able to strike back?

Somalia

Before you start writing think about the setting and imagine you are there.

Somali pirates take over a huge cargo freighter at sea. Things don’t look good for the crew, until the pirates start to investigate the cargo—Vestrons! Engage!

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WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.

• Describe the setting in detail.Think about words to describe the situation, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
• Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the crew or one of the robots. How you are feeling when the boat is invaded by pirates.

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Go to this padlet Somali and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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Somalia

I am a big robot I here a big thump I'm not scared. I am in my big red,blue,rusty,old,brown shipping container. I hear a thump, ahh, I hear them say” Hey you know who I am? I am the new captain” he said. “ Give me the key, GIVE ME THE KEY “ “ok here “ the captain said.

I got up and a man opened the container he said “Where is it?  Where is the money?” I hopped out and I said “Boo”  he said “Aaaaaaaa” He jumped of the ship “Haha” I said.

I got the key and it was as hot as the sun. I saw a bunch of men laughing and I threw them away. They said ahh I tapped the new captains back and he was like “ahh” I showed him the door and I said “Get out!” he was stupid, ha get out.

I gave the man’s hat back it was as white as snow. I said  “Let's go in the containers now.”  We ran Into the containers and went to sleep it was as soft as a pillow that feels really nice I said to myself.        

WALT do a modelling book by going into the class site

WALT use adjectives and simelis

Ah of to work today I get out of my hot science lab as I look in the mirror at my dry white skin. I go to brush my teeth because I slid my teeth across it and i fell some fury things . and I fell yuk I hop into the shower because I stink like vomit I walk onto the creaky floor as my feet slip through the slippery carpet it is as blue as a whale I get my fake teeth on and I get on my old 1980 goggles and my clothes as green as leafs

And I fell yuk still maybe something is happening in the

orphanage. I fly over with my old

Holy wings I glide through the wind it is as cold as antarctica I finally look at a child as he snored and my long slippery fingers   open the creaky door it is as creaky as a old wooden floor it is as brown as a peg I see a girl she has some ballet shoes I crack the round white egg on here pink yuk ballet shoes and I crack more they all have great dreams they love it so so much I go back home  THE END.  

        

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing

I am a animal my fur is as soft as a pillow. I smell like dust. I have such yellow eyes as my feet stand firm into the hard brown grassy ground. I feel as warm as the sun I am as nervous as going to space I am starting to stretch I hear a click sound as my back and my front legs click. mmmm it feels nice to stretch. I lower down my body and then I bring it up I hear a snap noise broom I start to run. I speed past the other cheetahs and panthers I start to turn into a human bean. I came so far I ran from London to RIO. I  couldn't believe my eyes I saw the big statue. I finally went to the opening ceremony then   I see red fireworks and blue ones to. I see other people there I hear a beeping sound. I am just about to turn into a panther again so I drink water. and it went away I finish my race and I won a shiny gold medal. I went back home and Practised for the next Olympics I ran 100 kilometers to tokyo. where the next Olympics is gone  be held and I was as tired as a new born baby. I sleep for twenty hours I was in such a relief I dream about an elephant chasing me I was scared but it was a dream I start to feel sick but I just leave it  THE END.