I wold like to be in the Waka Ama because It is sporty and I like sports. And then you wold like to be in a boat because they are cool and fun to ride.
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Waka Ama seems like a very interesting sport, unlike other water sports like swimming and yacht racing, it's a little bit different and unique. Can you find the difference between modern day canoe and the traditional Maori waka? You could even find a picture for each of them to support your explanation!
What sports do you play? Personally, I love soccer and I can't wait for the FIFA world cup 2018 to start! I would love to hear about your favourite sport!
Wonderful work, keep proof-reading and check for your spelling ('wold' - 'would'). Also, it is best not to start your sentence with 'And' try to find a different word to start your sentence to make your writing seem more professional.
I can't wait to read and comment your next blog post! :)
It's really nice to hear back from you! :) I hope you and your family had a lovely Christmas & New Years holiday. I also would want to watch you play in the World Cup. Do you play football in a club? Who is your favourite football player?
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Kia Ora Waisea,
ReplyDeleteYay! You have finished the first 10 points bonus activity! Thumbs up for completing two activities for day 1. Just to let you know, there is one more activity to finish for day 1 if you want to earn more points! :)
Waka Ama seems like a very interesting sport, unlike other water sports like swimming and yacht racing, it's a little bit different and unique. Can you find the difference between modern day canoe and the traditional Maori waka? You could even find a picture for each of them to support your explanation!
What sports do you play? Personally, I love soccer and I can't wait for the FIFA world cup 2018 to start! I would love to hear about your favourite sport!
Wonderful work, keep proof-reading and check for your spelling ('wold' - 'would'). Also, it is best not to start your sentence with 'And' try to find a different word to start your sentence to make your writing seem more professional.
I can't wait to read and comment your next blog post! :)
All the best!
Jade C.
My favourite sport is football I cant wait for the word cup to.
DeleteI wold like to play in a world cup when i am older
Hi Waisea,
DeleteIt's really nice to hear back from you! :) I hope you and your family had a lovely Christmas & New Years holiday. I also would want to watch you play in the World Cup. Do you play football in a club? Who is your favourite football player?
Jade C.